Well, In hopes of supporting Maou & his future work, I decided to post this new board for Maou.. If Mukuro decides to join in & anyone else Arcanum/Carnal Kingdom Related, it's up to them but, forum rules must be made as well!!
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Lulu:
Non sequitur (literary device) - Wikipedia
characterized with Non sequitur (literary device) - Wikipedia, therefore I's are mostly replaced by his name in his text.
Lulu also speaks in broken English, leaving out common or stop words such as "it" and "the". It further expands upon his personality. He has an engrained naivety which makes him suggestible and easy to manipulate up to a point. He is also notably unable to follow complex or esoteric terminology.
Data:
Data also has a serious personality and is moslty polite & speaks in a Thou - Wikipedia or an medieval england/middle ages inspired language..
Maou, I have a Idea for the speeches of my OCs.. I have somthing for certain OCs..
Alice and Jahnay/Lovestar:
Speech sound disorder - Wikipedia
Speech sound disorder - Wikipedia
Alice & Jahnay are characterized with both rhotacism and lambdacism, therefore both L's and R's are mostly replaced by W's in their text.
Hei Long, where Alice goes, he follows with him but it's clear that hides within under the skirt of friends & even between their boobs but mostly he's always latches onto Alice & even never lets him go like a alien leech but, he's very cute & cuddly but acts as Alice's moral compass but, he's also an Symbiotic Albino Eldritch Horror on orders of a mysterious "Mega Blue Wolf" To ensure Lovestar's safety & Lulu's safety but ultimately, Ellie's safety thus, they're chosen as the true childen of Light & Darkness..
Hei Long is also Alice's sensei whom taught him the White Rabbit style of Kung Fu & also taught Alice how to adapt & create new styles related to the White Rabbit Style Kung Fu thus, he's Alice's sifu but also his best friend..
However, Alice's true backstory will be told as well...
Now, I'm going to introduce Alice's Bunny Doll for such a main protagonist since this would fit with the Alice in Wonderland theme but it's not only his plushie doll that he carries around the entire comic of Rise Of The Dark Sun but it's also his steed If with permission of course Maou-sama..
His name will be Hei Long & he is Alice's guide & companion
Cross betwen:
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And
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& Would have a Red Cloak to fit for this albino plushie:
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Steed Form (Sea/Air)
A Cross between:
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And
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& Would have a Red Cloak to fit for this albino Eastern Dragon
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Steed Form (Ground)
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& Would have a Red Cloak to fit for this albino Qilin Monster:
Cross Between
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And
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Hei Long's Weapon:
Zatoichi Cane Sword:
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2.
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Nata Knife:
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Alice's Weapons:
Staff & Hammer:
Steel Bo Staff:
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Sledgehammer & various hammers)
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Knives & Katanas (They are long like swords & Alice will wield them like japanese katanas utilized one handed or dual wielded.)
Dao Sabre:
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2
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Katana:
1.
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2.
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3.
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Zatoichi Cane Sword:
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2.
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Nata Knife:
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Deba Knife:
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Meat Cleaver:
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Mythic Weapons:
(The Triads' Weapons Of The Light, Darkness & Hope)
Kavie's Hammer:
(Normal)
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(Evolved)
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Kavie's Sword:
(Normal)
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(Evolved)
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Zora's Keylord Xcalibur:
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(The weapon is apparently had an bunny rabbit which an scary one that replaces the Mickey Mouse logo on the chain & all of it's design is strictly gold & the handle is golden brown)
Pibibi's Sword:
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Alice's Mythic Weapons:
Alice's Sword:
Alice's Sword:
Cross between:
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And
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(Alice's first Most Strongest sword besides the Vorpal Knife & the Masamune thus, making Alice a true powerhouse..)
Vorpal Knife:
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Shin Vorpal Knife:
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2.
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(Evolved)
1.
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(Alice's Second Strongest Sword)
Masamune:
Note: Alice has regained this weapon from his foster grandmother Red Dragon but, his Bunny Rabbit Plushie later reforged this samurai sword into an more, powerful weapon, therefore becoming an powerful blade.
(Normal)
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(Evolved)
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(2)
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(3)
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(All of the sword's design are the same & for the third evolved form, it becomes more realistic as in the previous ones bring it's similarities)
Aura Sword:
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Alice's Third Strongest Sword)
(The Blade is greyish black with a dark cyan hued edge & the blade's hilt is dark teal with dark cyan adornments but emits an bluish cyan aura)
Spirit Sword:
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(The weapon is monochrome that emits an whitish teal aura.)
Herald Sword:
1.
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2.
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3.
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(The weapon is greenish-teal colored and paled but it's hilt is more, plant-like & has inchworm green leaves.)
(The Others I'll speak about is later..)
Alice has many abilities & though he is aware of the Lovestar bloodline & Alice is amongst them thus, he is somewhat has Lovestar's behavior but is more stern & serious than the comical Lovestar's doing desite a big sister figure to Alice..
However, I Have made up an concept for Alice but that will be for later...
If you have not heard of a TARDIS:
TARDIS - Wikipedia
Dollhouse is a mix of combined high school, kindergarten, monster zoo but it is more of an time machine, battleship, spaceship, & alien mothership & it is well known for traveling throughout dimensions & portals but it is mostly known for traveling throughout multiverses, universes, & omniverses but it is connected to The One & also The Powers That Be.
The reason for Alice's lifetime mission to solve problems through martial arts, battles, investigation, learning & through peaceful or violent solutions throughout omniverses is that Alice is tied to Dollhouse & also, Lovestar is Alice's girlfriend & Lulu is Waifu's boyfriend thus, this would serve that the four are connected to it but it is clear that Alice, Lovestar, Lulu & Waifu are the chosen ones that their miracle creating tears since childbirth became an act and a mere catalyst of hope for mankind & humanity that were
immediately are on the verge of extinction so, Alice & Lovestar made alot of friends on their travels & this would serve the fact that Alice would pose the greatest threat & these four holds the gift from The One in order..
Alice is a mere catalyst for the eldritch horror, the Hostarix which finally escaped from an failed sealing attempt by the Angels of heaven that made a last stand after the horror laid waste upon all of heaven but retreated when the creature's battle against God & The One proved to threaten a chain reaction which would accelerate Judgement Day as we know it thus provoking the Judgement Day Event.
Lovestar/Jahnay is a mere catalyst because she's the last Lovestar Child & her tears would serve an blessing, giving humanity the understanding of the true meanining of positivity & fully understand the entire truth of what they are born on this earth to do & would unite their hearts to help the Warriors of Light wage war against Chaostar, Mo Xing's ancestor. However, she's also the true mere catalyst when the Final World War erupted into Nuclear War, utterly killing the entire planet Earth in the process but however humanity survived only to suffer centuries of pure agony & however, when The Merging came, Earth splitted into two planets & merged with all planets thus, creating a new galaxy called Milky Way Wishes. New Earth is born but not as peaceful as it is with demons & angels are amok due to their history of bad blood between each other.
Lulu is another catalyst since his tears recalled the years & eons of wars, violence, murders, & all related to death & violence all were mere reasons the Final World War has begun in the first place & the merging brought about the resetting of life but humanity is at the mercy of not of angels & demons but monsters all are childlike (Lolis & Shotas included) with powers that are of martial artists, warriors, knights, sorcerers, magicians, ninjas, samurais & karate masters but are strictly jack of all trades that are similar to various Role Playing Game Caracter Classes & Dungeons & Dragons, Pathfinder , Final Fantasy & Wizardry were mere catalysts based on Lulu's tears therefore, Hostarix's curse upon Fantasy & Reality in an hellbent attempt to subjugate good & evil
changed everything & the humans are left to fend for themselves since their worlds & other worlds colonized by humans are overrun & taken over by an outbreak of Shortstacks, Lolis, Shotas, Humanoid Dolls, & Plushies & they all were slavers, breeders, barbarians, martial arts rivals, all to the shoguns, daimyos, emperors & to worst of all warlords, warmongers, serial killers to criminals but when Lovestar has ended the violence against humanity, the humans got along with the Magicris whom those Shortstack or Children are called but the humans are still under their authority as well as other races even demons and angels so, those Magicris are extremely powerful & godlike Lolis & Shotas inspired Shortstacks & they're like the Greek Pantheons and the Chinese Pantheons therefore they run everything at this point..
Heheheheh.. That's great! Let the idea stick for it is needed..
Also, I have made an great concept but it reminds me of Street Fighter.. Although I plan on using Alice & Lulu as true Shotoclones but diffrient styles of fighting since Alice is from the White Rabbit School of Kung Fu & Lulu, the Green Dragon School Of Chinese Kung fu & based on the background of my concept, Alice & Lulu were once rivals & had the same master whom was a Red Hooded Cloaked Old Lady whom was an escaped convict and an addict of violence & murder but she stopped it & after the Apocalyptic Merging, she has secluded the orphans (Which Alice & Lulu are among them) on an dimensional surface of New Earth & had trained them. The Old Lady named "Red Dragon Riding Hood" whom in past like was a violent prostitute, both addiction in sex & gore..
It's clear that Alice was nicknamed as the "White Rabbit" whom is known for his kickboxing moves & movements of a rabbit, & Lulu as the "Jabberwock" known for creating Dragon Based Martial Arts & his ferocity based on the fabled creature & they were competing for Lovestar and Waifu's hand and they once did until Ellie came.
Ellie taught them the most important virutes of the Wude & since then, Lulu & Alice became friends but it seems that Alice & Lulu became leaders & then Lovestar, Waifu, Ellie, Bibi, & then afterwards, Blanchette the ninja Red Riding Hood, Blue Fairy, the Zen Archer, and Ryo Selenski, the Barbarian Warrior.
After Red Dragon's passing & the orphanage was finally reshaped due to Lovestar's crying in tears at an tragic incident of Red Dragon's murder & mostly Alice, therefore reshaping the orphanage into a Japanese High-School esque interdimensional base of operations called Dollhouse, The Dollhouse Club (Alice's Team) was born & apparently,
Alice was the leader & since then Alice soon learned that he is the last of the Lovestar Children since the predecessor whom is Jahnay the whole time that was called Lovestar as well & since Dollhouse is a Japanese Kindergarten-inspired High School which is overrun by various Horror-genre inspired monsters, & when the tears of Alice merged with the Merging & so as Lovestar, Dollhouse became what similar to a TARDIS from Doctor Who but it's an massive complex-inspired high school turned castle at night which this Disney inspired castle is where their base of operations are held..
Heheheheheh...
Oh, BTW.. Have you decided that Lulu, Alice, Lovestar & Ellie are both the Male & Female Protagonists of your later Rise Of Sareth/Dark Sun Stories later on? If it's by chance either Alice or Lulu, than I will try something special & their strongest weapons that they will wield.. I recently am working on more of Lulu's sword fighting styles & the same to Alice...
Ever heard of the Wuxia genere & have been watching chinese martial arts movies before?
You do now understand that the martial arts abilities of my OCs are strictly Wuxia inspired before if it's a yes?
Just curious, not much of a pester..
I actually sent The rise of Sareth - Issue 1 script to Mukuro a little while ago so that he could read through it and I could get his approval although I have not made a decision on the front cover yet
There is also The rise of Sareth which is due to have its first Issue 1 commissioned after the current Commission has been completed
although I have finished writing the scripts I am going to need to make some alterations to The rise of Sareth - Issue 5 to make it more exciting I'm thinking an assassination attempt in an arena will do nicely
it involves an ashen skinned demon with three tongues and wings and pitch-black eyes as well as a minotaur although I'm going to have to contemplate on how complex the script is going to be
Though the decision is strictly offical, It wold work best on your What-If Series & I f accepted, I have something prepped for the Kiko Design!!
A while back, I had an great Idea for Isadora & my OC Kiko Lovestar as well thus, the result:
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Heheheheheheh.. This should fit well & Better..
Well, when it comes to The Carnal Kingdom comics the latest to be completed is The Carnal Kingdom What-if series Yoko! Sold, to the Lord Sareth! Which for those of you who don't know is a reference to WHAT-IF SERIES 03: Yoko! Sold, to the Lord Sareth!
http://thedarkandpassionateworld.com/slavegirlseries.html
Mukuro actually send me an email asking me which one of the girls I would like in the what if series and I chose Yoko and he even paid for an artist to create an image to be made just for me